From 0ef4eca0bb3bf9f4351608b6cb9b327878b06cf7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Linda Date: Tue, 28 Aug 2018 09:33:06 -0400 Subject: [PATCH] improved wording --- src/views/ev3/l10n.json | 17 ++++++++--------- src/views/microbit/l10n.json | 6 +++--- src/views/wedo2/l10n.json | 6 +++--- 3 files changed, 14 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-) diff --git a/src/views/ev3/l10n.json b/src/views/ev3/l10n.json index d1a79b471..58a815c8f 100644 --- a/src/views/ev3/l10n.json +++ b/src/views/ev3/l10n.json @@ -35,14 +35,13 @@ "ev3.updateFirmwareTitle": "Try updating your EV3 firmware", "ev3.updateFirmwareText": "We recommend updating to EV3 firmware version 1.10E or above. See {firmwareUpdateLink}.", "ev3.firmwareUpdateText": "firmware update instructions from LEGO", - "ev3.imgAltEv3Illustration": "Illustration of an EV3 Computer featuring some examples of interacting with an EV3.", - "ev3.imgAltAddExtension": "In the editor, click on the \"Add Extensions\" button on the lower left.", - "ev3.imgAltAcceptConnection": "Use the buttons of your EV3 to accept the connection.", - "ev3.imgAltAcceptPasscode": "Use the center button of your EV3 to accept the passcode.", - "ev3.imgAltWaitForWindows": "Windows notifies you when EV3 is ready.", + "ev3.imgAltEv3Illustration": "Illustration of an EV3 hub, featuring some examples of interacting with it.", + "ev3.imgAltAcceptConnection": "Use the buttons on your EV3 to accept the connection.", + "ev3.imgAltAcceptPasscode": "Use the center button on your EV3 to accept the passcode.", + "ev3.imgAltWaitForWindows": "Windows will notify you when the EV3 is ready.", "ev3.imgAltEnterPasscodeMac": "Enter the passcode into the connection request window opening on your Mac.", - "ev3.imgAltPlugInMotor": "Port A is not to be confused with Port 4 on the other side of the EV3.", - "ev3.imgAltWaveHello": "Example of a Scratch project with a waving fairy.", - "ev3.imgAltDistanceInstrument": "Example of a Scratch project with a guitar.", - "ev3.imgAltSpaceTacos": "Example of a Scratch project with Scratch Cat and a taco in space." + "ev3.imgAltPlugInMotor": "To find port A: hold the EV3 with the screen and buttons facing you, with the screen above the buttons. Port A is on top, and it is the left-most one", + "ev3.imgAltWaveHello": "A Scratch project with a waving fairy.", + "ev3.imgAltDistanceInstrument": "A Scratch project with a guitar.", + "ev3.imgAltSpaceTacos": "A Scratch project with Scratch Cat and a taco in space." } diff --git a/src/views/microbit/l10n.json b/src/views/microbit/l10n.json index 871ef7016..388db9497 100644 --- a/src/views/microbit/l10n.json +++ b/src/views/microbit/l10n.json @@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ "microbit.imgAltMicrobitIllustration": "Illustration of the micro:bit circuit board.", "microbit.imgAltDragDropHex": "Drag and drop the HEX file from the folder you downloaded it to to the micro:bit.", "microbit.imgAltDisplayH": "A micro:bit displaying an H.", - "microbit.imgAltHeartBeat" : "An example project with a heart.", - "microbit.imgAltTiltGuitar": "An example project with a guitar.", - "microbit.imgAltOceanAdventure": "An example project with a clown fish and a saxophone under water." + "microbit.imgAltHeartBeat" : "A Scratch project with a heart.", + "microbit.imgAltTiltGuitar": "A Scratch project with a guitar.", + "microbit.imgAltOceanAdventure": "A Scratch project with a clown fish and a saxophone under water." } diff --git a/src/views/wedo2/l10n.json b/src/views/wedo2/l10n.json index 5736298fc..0adfcd2df 100644 --- a/src/views/wedo2/l10n.json +++ b/src/views/wedo2/l10n.json @@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ "wedo2.legacyInfoText": "Visit our page about {wedoLegacyLink}.", "wedo2.legacyLinkText": "using LEGO WeDo with Scratch 2.0", "wedo2.imgAltWeDoIllustration": "An illustration of a WeDo2 featuring a tilt sensor and a motor.", - "wedo2.imgAltStarter1": "An example project with a dog and a taco.", - "wedo2.imgAltStarter2": "An example project with a toad playing instruments in space.", - "wedo2.imgAltStarter3": "An example project with dinosaurs." + "wedo2.imgAltStarter1": "A Scratch project with a dog and a taco.", + "wedo2.imgAltStarter2": "A Scratch project with a toad playing instruments in space.", + "wedo2.imgAltStarter3": "A Scratch project with dinosaurs." }