Tweak /careers copy

app/templates/careers.jade

@@ -15,10 +15,12 @@ block content
       h3 Engineering at CodeCombat
 
       .big-text
-        p We are just getting started, and there is so much more to build. Over the next year, we'll be pushing hard on mobile, gameplay, and education tools. We are looking for strong engineers who are eager to jump in and take the lead on shipping these projects and more.
+        p Although we've already reached millions of players, we are just getting started, and there is so much more to build. Over the next year, we'll be pushing hard on mobile, gameplay, and education tools. We are looking for strong engineers who are eager to jump in and take the lead on shipping these projects and more.
 
         p CodeCombat is built with Node, Backbone, and CoffeeScript. If you don’t know these particular technologies yet we’ll help you ramp up in no time.
 
+        p CodeCombat is 100% open source, which is a lot of fun–you'll get to work with 400 open source contributors and be able to take your code (and your awesome GitHub profile) wherever you go.
+
       h3 Upcoming Projects
 
       .big-text
@@ -40,7 +42,7 @@ block content
 
         p
           strong Real-time multiplayer
-          div Wouldn’t it be cool if players could battle head-to-head or team up in an epic real-time dungeon?  Great, you should come help us build it!
+          div Wouldn’t it be cool if players could battle head-to-head or team up in an epic real-time dungeon crawl?  Great, you should come help us build it!
 
       +next-steps
 
@@ -58,6 +60,8 @@ block content
 
         p We’re looking for someone who is well-versed in iOS development, has a strong understanding of good UX, and isn’t afraid to get their hands dirty in the backend code.
 
+        p (Typing real code on a iPad–how could that be any fun? Well, just wait until you see what we've been working on.)
+
       +next-steps
 
   else if position === 'game-designer'
@@ -95,7 +99,7 @@ block content
 
   else
     .center
-      h1 Available Positions
+      h1 Available Positions – San Francisco
       .big-text
         p
           a(href="/careers/software-engineer") Software Engineer
@@ -113,14 +117,14 @@ mixin company-blurb
   .big-side-margins.big-text
     p CodeCombat is changing how kids learn computer science, using real programming languages to explore an adventure game.  Students start with simple function calls to move a hero and before long they’re writing functions to send archers to the eastern defenses.
 
-    p Our teacher tools allow CodeCombat to create classroom experiences which are awesome and effective.
+    p Our teacher tools allow CodeCombat to create classroom experiences that inspire students to become programmers. Can you imagine how cool it would have been to play CodeCombat in school when you were growing up? We are bringing the wizardry of programming to everyone.
 
     .big-side-margins
       p
         .praise-quote My students have started working on CodeCombat and love it! I love that they are learning coding and problem solving skills without them even knowing it!!
         .praise-author - Kristin Huff, Teacher, Webb City School District
 
-    p We’re looking for team members who can help us reach our students around the world. If you are passionate about gaming or education, a self starter, and looking to join a small scrappy team, we want to meet you!
+    p We’re looking for team members who can help us reach our students around the world. If you are passionate about gaming or education, a self starter, and looking to join a small, scrappy team, we want to meet you!
 
 mixin next-steps
   h3 Next Steps
@@ -129,3 +133,5 @@ mixin next-steps
     p
       span.spr Please send a resume (and anything else you’d like us to see) to
       a(href="mailto:careers@codecombat.com") careers@codecombat.com
+    p
+      em Note: you'll be working in our San Francisco office, so you'll need US work authorization.